Question #1:
Is this a good descriptive essay 5 paragraphs or can someone change it around and make it sound better?
One breezy evening, when i was on cycle ride through the remote locations of my urban village, i discovered a lake. I went on its banks and was gazing at the ripples created by the fish moving on the surface of the water, they were feeding on the bread pieces thrown onto them by some kiddies. The cool breeze was really beckoning me on a ride through my fantasies & the silence prevailing got me in a freeze stand.There was amazing flowers all around colorful as a world of rainbows. The smell of the fresh blooming scent of the lilies was heaven scent. As the wind blew across the pond the fragrance from the lilies drifted my way and I just laid back and felt so peaceful. There could be no other place closer to heaven scent. Smelled like my grandmothers place with all the most beautiful blooms you would ever see.
As the day turned to evening, the thirst came on. I leaned my hand into the pond and dripped the water across my face. It felt so cool and relaxing. I scooped more water into my hand and drank it. It was like drinking from water streams from a mountain. The most clean refreshing taste you could ever imagine. It wasn’t like an ordinary pond; this pond was so clear and sparkling.
I stretched out and ran my feet into the cool water. The water was so relaxing and felt so good. The fish were so amazing they would just jump right across my feet. As I laid there the water around my feet started to feel like pressure. I leaned up and it was the biggest fish you could imagine looking at me as if he was smiling. I had a bag of chips and I tossed one toward him. He jumped and gobbled it right up.
He blew a string of water on me and jumped all around the pond splashing. I was so amazed and felt like I found a magical pond. I got up and started running around the pond. It was like he was chasing me, he followed me every move I made. I had the most amazing wonderful time ever. As night drew I tossed my last chip to the biggest fish ever and he swallowed it and did a back flip like he was a dolphin. This place was the most extraordinary pond I ever been to. I will be there every weekend.
Can someone help me write a descriptive essay draft and then re-vise it to a descriptive essay?
It has to be about a place near water (like a pond, river, ocean)
I do not know how to write descriptive essays, not good at writing at all.
It has to be 400-500 words with 5 paragraphs.
Don't laugh i bet what i wrote is stupid I am not good at all in writing please help change it all to descriptive and make it sound better
SOMEONE PLEASE HELP. PLEASE CHANGE EVERYTHING THAT NEEDS TO BE CHANGE AND TO SOUND BETTER AND MAKE IT ALL MAKE SINCE. IT NEEDS TO BE DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY AND I AM NOT GOOD AT ALL WITH WRITING.
i got to have a rough draft the i got to re-vise it to a descriptive essay
Question #2:
Can criminals access my bank account if they only have my name, account number and sort code?
How do they do it, what is the process?They can not just send in a request for funds transfare, can they?
Question #3:
How long for a HSBC to Santander bank transfer? Points for best answer!?
Hello,I'm currently waiting for some money to be transfered from an HSBC account to a Santander account. This was done on Tuesday. How long will this transfer take? Points to the best answer, and also can you tell me where u got this info?? xxx
Question #4:
Can a 240VAC to 24DC transformer (& rectifier) be used backwards?
Can I use a transformer designed to step down from mains power to 24V DC (such as in an old projector), as an Inverter ... to put power from a bank of batteries (and a solar panel) BACK onto the mains grid (240VAC)?My query is whether a transformer can be used backwards... and if a rectifier can as well.
Question #5:
I need pure romance consultant help... Advice?
I just have a few questions about pure romance! I am a college student who is looking for a way to find some extra income for myself! I have heard a lot about being a pure romance consultant and I am seriously considering becoming one. I live in a college town and I think it would spark the interest of a lot of women and college girls! Here are some of my questions...1. How do you get the word out on your new job as a consultant and book parties? I live in an apartment complex so would hanging on the community bulletin board be a good idea?
2. I know the pay is fairly decent. I have done research but I had a question on getting paid. Do you have to buy product to sell or can you sample products at a party and then have the girls from the party order the product online? If so, do the sales from my party off the website get paid to me and if they do does the commission I make go to my bank account through direct deposit?
3. I know I will buy some product online to sell so which products seem to be the best sellers?
4. I notice when you go to sign the agreement it asks what your tax rate is... What information do I put here?
Any information pertaining to these questions would be helpful!
Question #6:
how to transfer money from my american express gift card to paypal/bank account?
Question #7:
Why is it so complicated to delete a Facebook account?
It takes too many clicks and when you reach the option you have to wait 14 days.If you email them, you have to wait a few days for a response which sometimes doesn't come.
Shouldn't it be an immediate process? Not even banks make you wait 14 days to cancel an account and take out your money.
Question #8:
Question about an eccentric genius I once knew...?
I met a homeless man who was into his 80s, but remarkably smart. He's been around before the television came out, so he's seen the whole explosion of technology era. But here is a list I made of him, that I always admired, but always wondered HOW to be like him?? Here it is:1- Most (if not all) of his information, comes from reading.
2- He has 2 Phds that I know of (Chemistry and an Engineering degree) possibly more.
3- His memory is startling. He can remember whole layouts of cities. He would talk about buildings that were taken down 15 years ago in NYC. And he know the same about countries he's visited, like France. He'd say: "And if you walked 4 blocks North and made a left from there, you'd find a small bakery that's been around since 1889."
4- He knows everything, about everything...
Example: He'd talk about Airplanes and their origins. Then he would talk about the type of "rivets" they'd use and where "rivets" originated from. And 2 hours later, he's talking about the slaves in Europe that helped make it possible. And an hour after that, he's talking about the Fall of Rome. He can go on and on.
I don't know why he chose to be homeless. But he spends his evenings, either in the NY public library, reading a random non-fiction book (usually the encyclopedias), or standing in front of a Chase bank holding doors open for people so they could spare some change.
Bonus question:
Does being too smart eventually make you crazy/eccentric?? I keep hearing that, and I'm hoping it's not true because even though I'm not a genius myself, I am very curious by nature, and they say curiosity is a major backbone of Genius,
Question #9:
How hard would this be? Website idea?
How hard would it be to setup a site that people can buy something from and have a monthy payment plan setup to automatically take the money from the bank account every specified date. I would need the site to be able to almost view account history to make sure they had a steady income for atleast 3 months. Is this somthing that can be done? How much would it cost me?Question #10:
Does anyone remember a christmas movie from the late 80's early 90's?
Does anyone know a Christmas movie that was late 80's early 90's and a mom went into a bank and left her kids in a car and a man drove off with her kids and I remember the end where the kids were in Santa's house and he was showing the kid the letter they sent them?? I can't place this movie!! Please help! Thanks!!!Question #11:
Is there someone I can report this to?
Well you know how sometimes you get fake emails that want your bank pin number to "put money into it" but they're going to steal money? Well, I got an email like that. Could you tell me if there is an email that I can report this to as scamming or something like that? Here's the email:FROM THE DESK OF ALDRIC ETHAN
THE AUDITING AND ACCOUNTING
SECTION MANAGER BANK OF AFRICA,
(B.O.A.) OUAGADOUGOU BURKINA FASO.
Dear Friend,
I know that this message will come to you as a surprise. I am the Auditing and Accounting section manager with Bank of Africa, Ouagadougou Burkina faso. I Hope that you will not expose or betray this trust and confident that I am about to repose on you for the mutual benefit of our both families.
I need your urgent assistance in transferring the sum of ($15) Million US Dollars only to your account within 10 or 14 banking days. This money has been dormant for years in our Bank without claim.I want the bank to release the money to you as the nearest person to our deceased customer late Mr Andrew Eich who died along with his supposed next of kin in an air crash since 31st October 1999.I don't want the money to go into government treasury as an abandoned fund. So this is the reason why I am contacting you so that the bank can release the money to you as the next of kin to the deceased customer.
Please I would like you to keep this proposal as a top secret and delete it if you are not interested.Upon receipt of your reply, I will give you full details on how the business will be executed and also note that you will have 30% of the above mentioned sum if you agree to handle this business with me. I am expecting your urgent response as soon as you receive my message.
Regard,
Mr.Aldric Ethan.
Question #12:
Where can I apply for a loan with no income, no bank account, But i have a the titles to my car?
Question #13:
How come white people are the kings/queens of masterminding anything that is wrong?
White women kill and then decide to go public with her lies.White men kill, rob, and everything else but has a long blue print on how and what he is going to do.
White women kill their kids and then have the nerve to appear on national tv just to tell lies. Knowing they are guilty the whole time!
I know what you people are going to say! Black women kill their kids to! Then, you are going to pull up something off the internet thinking you can prove me wrong..well, you are wrong..White people are masterminds when it comes to killing, you are good at plotting but fail sometimes but not all the time. You get away with your evil plans sometimes. I see on tv when your white men are plotting to rob a bank he has the blue prints of the bank, goes in and observe everything that goes on in the bank, and when white women plot to kill their kids they already have the death letter written out for the public to hear before they even decide to go on with their killing spree!
Its not a racist question sir/maam, its just a simple question for anyone who feels the need to answer!
So, go right on ahead with you answers/comments it doesnt matter!
@ Marco-No thats not the damn answer im looking for you damn nut!
@Go Away Trolls- Who cares if you dont like me you think i give a damn about you not liking me? I thought I told you to STOP answering my questions! You queen of trolls!
@Tessa- They can choose whomever they want to date. Im not messing up anything its already messed but i didnt do it!
@Yubadub?? I dont see me doing that
Question #14:
Credit limit suddenly changed... What's up?
So today I checked my bank account online, and suddenly it said "Credit Card" (I have a standard student one) to "MC Platinum."I had a 1k limit and now it says I have 0. I only charged $100 on it. I'm looking for more info online and can't seem to find much on it. I may call them tomorrow. Do you guys know what's up? Have you ever experienced this?
I have the card for 7ish months now. Thanks in advance!
Forgot to say that I always pay my balance in full. No interests yet!
Question #15:
Banks lending money to minors?
I'm looking to buy a new car, and I'm looking at possibly borrowing $2000. I am 17 years old (18 in February), and I was just wondering if a bank would be willing to borrow that to me, and I would get my parents to cosign the loan. I have Wells Fargo bank, if that helps at all. And also, how long would they allow this loan to be out for? I'm not exactly rich. Would I be able to choose my loan duration? (Like, 24 months?)The title to the car will go in my parents name. But I am simply paying for it. And since I am not 18, and cannot legally sign a contract, that is what a co-signer would be for, as well as taking financial responsibility if I do not.
My parents are unwilling to loan me the money. My first car I bought, I saved up for, they paid for, and I paid them back immediately, whereas this time would be different, seeing as to how I do not have the money at this moment. And I know I don't have a credit history, but would having a cosigner make that so it doesn't matter?
Question #16:
my son killed himself, insurance question, please...?
My ex-wife committed suicide last August, leaving my son with a benefit (I forgot how much, a little over 250,000, I think). He just took his life and my ex wife's ex bf said that my son told him that he filed for and got the money. He wasn't giving straight answer's so I don't know if he did. Naturally, i feel a little mercenary but quite frankly, I need a lot of help paying for his service. His mothers cost 17,000. If he did claim the benefit and it is in his bank account, do I inherit it? If he didn't claim the insurance benefit, what then? Is that money gone or would I inherit the claim? Thanks in advance...Jason, thanks but that not quite right. If the insured stays alive for about 5 years, they DO pay. She lived several years after taking the policy out.
And he did collect or so I've been told.
Question #17:
Bookkepping question...Do you treat Paypal same as a bank account?
Ok, lets say you have a small business like a llc. You can't afford a merchant account but you have a paypal business account. Most clients pay with Paypal. Your company also has a Business checking account which rarely gets a client check in there. Can you transfer all paypal earnings into the Business checking account and leave money there to pay bills, taxes, buy equipment and also withdraw money for yourself (owners draw) ?Or would be better to treat paypal same as bank and instead of a "payment processor" and don't transfer all earnings to the Business Checking account, and withdraw money directly into your personal banking acc (owners draw), and if you need to buy something for the company, then buy with Paypal???
sorry if sounds confusing...Is because I always hear people saying, always transfer all your earnings to a bank account...never leave money there.
Question #18:
Can someone tell me what Bush policy caused the recession?
Since he didn't sign any bank deregulation (Clinton was the last one to do that), it can't be that.Since HUD, Fannie, and Freddie all had their policies in place before the Bush presidency, it couldn't be that. For that matter, the mortgage meltdown can't be linked to any Bush policy, so it couldn't have been that.
The Iraq war has cost $750 billion over seven years about the same as Obama spent for stimulus in one year. In fact, if $750 billion of spending is good for the economy when Obama did it, why would it be bad when Bush did it? So, it can't be that.
The Bush tax cuts on all but the upper 5% of wage earners (the employer class) is considered "good" by the Obama White house. That 5% of wage earners equates to about $80 billion not being collected in taxes. Obama is overspending by that amount every 21 days, so that can't be it.
What was it, then?
Question #19:
I need help with my C code.?
All right, I need a different pair of eyes to look at this code. Everything in this works fine except for one element. The letter input, the multiple input, the while/if/then statement, the addition, the subtraction, the function calls, everything works fine except for one thing: If you try to do multiple transactions, it messes up. It doesn't crash, or anything, it merely skews the math. For instance, if you input an initial amount of 50.00, then add a deposit of 50.00, and take out a withdrawal of 40.00, you end up with a final total of 10.00, which is obviously incorrect. I know the problem has something to do with the two function calls within the WHILE parameters, but I'm not sure what it is. I don't want you to solve it for me, but if you could tell me if I'm looking in the right place, I would really appreciate it. (And please don't criticize my spacing, or the fact I'm using scanf(), or anything like that. I am doing this exactly how I am being taught.) Here's the code:#include <stdio.h>
#include <ctype.h>
#pragma warning(disable:4996)
/* All right, everything's set except that it can't compute multiple values.
It can do single values, a single instance of Deposit or Withdrawal, but if
you try to deposit then withdrawal, it messes up. */
void explanation();
int main (void)
{
char letter;
float deposit(float);
float withdrawal(float);
float total = 0.0;
float initial = 0.0;
explanation();
printf("Please input the initial amount: ");
scanf("%f", &initial);
printf("\nEnter the transactions now.\n");
printf("Enter an F for the transaction type when you are finished. \n\n");
printf("Transaction type (D=Deposit, W=withdrawal, F=finished): ");
scanf(" %c", &letter );
total = initial;
while (letter != 'F')
{
if (letter == 'D') total = deposit(initial);
else total = withdrawal(initial);
printf("\nTransaction type (D=Deposit, W=withdrawal, F=finished): ");
scanf(" %c", &letter );
}
printf("Your ending balance is %5.2f \n", total);
return 0;
}
float deposit (float dep)
{
float damount;
float depo;
printf("Amount: ");
scanf("%f%*c", &damount);
depo = dep + damount;
return depo;
}
float withdrawal (float wit)
{
float dmount;
float with;
printf("Amount: ");
scanf("%f%*c", &dmount);
with = wit - dmount;
return with;
}
void explanation()
{
printf("Written by Mark Mansur. \n");
printf("This program allows the user to input an initial balance, \n");
printf("then deposit or withdraw any number of dollars, \n");
printf("then end the program by typing in 'f'. \n\n");
printf("BANK ACCOUNT PROGRAM \n");
printf("-------------------- \n");
}
Ohh...So you're saying that I need to use a different variable for my deposit and withdrawal function calls? Although, I think I remember trying that, and it didn't work. Hmm.
But doesn't the initial variable change when the value is returned from the function call?
Question #20:
If i cancel my broadband direct debit, will it affect my credit?
I have a broadband account, and they want £75 for a early cancellation from the contract. If i just cancel the direct debit and close the bank account will it effect my credit rating? Im currently living in rented accommodation, and will be moving back in with my parents. I know ill proberlly need to pay the money to get out of it, but i was wondering just what if i cancel the direct debit and close the bank account?Would appreciate any help!
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